Try and care

Try and care

A Poem by Weeping Willow
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These are all the things I secertly want to tell my sister

"

You think because I try I’m stupid,

Every time I succeed at something you say it’s nothing,

You say people like me better than you,

And that no one cares about your problems,

You say no one cares about your achievements,

That no one cares if you die,

We do care but,

If you don’t care about others how can we care about you,

© 2012 Weeping Willow


Author's Note

Weeping Willow
Terrible grammar, please tell me what you think and phoebe if you read this don't get angry

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Aww... Very true...
I like it... Shelfing :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you
good point for sure. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you
Lovely

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you
I can relate to that to with my x-friends and you know who they are. But I'm not going to say their names on here though. 100/100 keep writting more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you
Ruby

12 Years Ago

:)
Very true and very touching:) Good job with this! keep it up!
~Dreamer!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you
Your grammer isn't too terribly bad. :)
Actually I've wanted to tell a friend the exact same thing once. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

12 Years Ago

thank you

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Added on October 6, 2012
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Weeping Willow
Weeping Willow

Dream land, Shelbyville, Australia



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My name is Weeping Willow I am a girl, and I love to write. I’m not always good and usually get bored of something easily. I’m a little weird and far out when it comes to stories. Even th.. more..

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