Chapter 3

The scars of the past hurt

Fourth rule, forget your past, it will only hurt you if you don’t.

Crimson took me inside and got me dressed in a maids outfit, and handed me some other clothes 

“Now you’ll have to wash them yourself and you’ll have to do anything that the master and his family says. What else, oh I should show you Mika but that can wait for.” Says Crimson showing me to my room “you’ll have to share a room with me, Hannah and Ramah. And work just a little bit less then usually; now let’s get you some work before Mika steal you.” She says while dragging me though the maids rooms, at the moment I don’t know what to feel, I have so many question. But I just go with the current, so I don’t get hurt.

“CRIMSON, CRIMSON,” a voice yells. Crimson starts to run faster as the voice gets louder and louder,

“Make sure she doesn’t catch us, or let’s just say you probably ended up dead.” Crimson says as she keeps looking behind her. I start to get scared, what kind of monster is the thing chasing us. Out of know where Phantom came and grabbed my arm

“You deal with Mika, and I’ll take Kiara somewhere save.” He says pulling me away from Crimson, she agree and lets go of my arm. “Don’t worry I won’t let Mika kill you on your first day.” Phantom says running around a corner. I start thinking to myself how big is this dam house as we keep running, we soon make it to the palace where I can get a job. And Phantom leaves me there the woman give me a job cleaning Hell’s room as well as helping in the kitchen. As I walk back to my room I find Crimson tied up in rope,

“Well, she got you and your still living,” I say as I untie her.

“Yeah, she got me but she’s looking for you, so we better go to our room before she finds us.” Crimson says standing up. As I get into bed I can’t help thinking of the past and my old life,

“Sissy, sissy look what I made.” A little girl says holding out a necklace made of flowers,

“That’s beautiful, May do you want to see some more beautiful flower.” Say Kiara picking up her younger sister. Kiara takes May to a beautiful meadow filled with flowers of every sort, the two start running around the meadow until they get tired and lay down.

A loud scream fills Kiara’s ears “Sissy don’t let them take me, I want to stay with you.”

“May, MAY!”

At that point I woke up screaming, why couldn’t I save her? Crimson walks over to me with a candle in hand. “Are you okay?” she asks, I look at her and then she sees my burn mark on my shoulder. I quickly cover it up,

“Just dreaming of the past,” I say going back to sleep.      

Author's Note

terrible grammar

Reviews

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I don't know what I would do if I saw Kiara o.o
1. Freak out
2. Run around
3. Laugh
4. Fangirl scream
5. Or faint
XD
Haha. Great chapter ^_^
100/100

[Cynthia Man]

Wow, Kiara is definitely a tough girl, and I totally like that, for truth, I never like weak female character, but I usually find myself liking tough and strong ones! Also, I really like the characters of your story, and well, there's a lot to find out in the story, so much mystery!

[RachelReaper]

Kiara's a strong person, and that's great for your main character. I think now that Hell is not a demon, but simply a very rich man who can maybe tap into powers or other sources that are not quite his own. Anyways, keep up the great action!

[Weeping Willow]

I like keeping people guessing and i'm not telling you if he's a demon or not. but he is powerful, and you can usally tell if it's a demon. Any thing with red eyes or point ears are demons.