Chapter 2

Chapter 2

A Chapter by Weeping Willow
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Hell’s property

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Third rule, everything come with a price.

The demons charge toward us and in two second flat he starts betting them all up. I can’t believe my eyes not one has ever been able to hurt a demon before, let alone beat them up. As soon as he’s done he jumps onto a roof of one of the city building and starts walking as if to tease the demons.

“Would you stop fooling around,” I try and yell in his ear.

“Hey you should be companying, I just saved your life.” His say still just walking

“Yeah well my life is still endanger!” I shout,

“Don’t worry, even if they come up here, there is no way I would let them touch you.” He says with a smile,

“Fine, if that’s so then put me down and untie me.” I say wriggling around

“No can do, besides its more fun to carry you.” He says laughing and then he decides to jump off the building.

“Are you insane?” I ask, as he gets ready to jump.  He just smiles and jumps, I am surprised at what happens next. As he jumps a small blue box appears and fills the night sky with the colours of a rainbow. I forget that I may just and get lost in the colour, when the colours go we ended up at a giant mansion. There are people waiting right in front of us, they look like slave but then I remembered the four rule of the demons, I just hope that they don’t follow the demon’s rules. He finally puts me down and gives to the slave,

“Clean her up and give her a job, after all she owns me her life.” He says walking off, one of the maids unties me as another follows him. I overheard the other maid call him Master Hell and think that Hell is the perfect name for him.

“What’s your name?” the maid says picking me up,

  “Kiara, and yours?” I reply

“Crimson, oh and I just thought I’d ask why you two were so late.” Crimson says looking at me

“Well, he was teasing the demons.” I replied

“What, but he was meant to get you before the start of the culling.” She says looking a pair of young man coming this way, “well that’s weird, maybe he didn’t have an opening or…” she says wandering off. “Phantom, Nebula what are you doing here”

“Just checking out the newbie,” Nebula says staring at me

“She’s pretty cute,” Phantom says circling me.

“Be careful, she is Hell’s property you’ll have to beat him in a fight to get her.” Crimson says trying to take me away

“Maybe I will then,” Phantom says walking off. I just hope that they aren’t as crazy as Hell.       



© 2012 Weeping Willow


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I lol'd so much

Posted 11 Years Ago


Weeping Willow

11 Years Ago

on what part
Chloe

11 Years Ago

"It's much more fun to carry you"
Gotta read more of this awesome book OwO
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


I find myself liking Hell, a LOT , The story is really fun, the whole process, and I'm drawn into it. Interesting development! Just to add, I love how you start the chapter as well, and not to mention I'm smiling reading it, it's just so much fun!
Good Write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


so... is Hell a demon? A greater demon, perhaps? Maybe you just want me to read more to find out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really interesting. I am sitting on the edge of my seat reading this

Posted 12 Years Ago



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