Chapter 1

Into the centre of the city

Second rule, demons are cruel.

I sit in my room, which is really a cardboard box trying to get some sleep, but the rain for last night has left my box damp. As a water droplet fall on my face the loud speaker turns on.

“Listen, people of Avian, all of you are required to go to the centre of the city. The reason for this is that the city is too crowded; we will pick people out of the crowd as sacrifices. We will sacrifice 500 people if anyone resists that amount will double to 1,000. That is all,” a demon says through the loud speaker. I exit out of my room and as I get out my box falls to piece “Oh great, that’s going to come out of want little pay I get! I’ll have to have nothing but stale bread and water for a while. I think to myself and find my friends walking to the centre of the city. I walk towards them and talk to them quietly.     

 As we walk to the centre of the city I think to myself, that now this world is really falling to pieces. My friends and I walk the streets in fear, seeing the demons pull aside people we know and even care about. We are just hoping that we won’t be their next target, my heart starts to beat faster and faster as I get the same bad feeling I got when a rich demon took my sister away on her birthday. I have a feeling that me or one of my friends isn’t going to make it back home. Then as a demon walks towards us, my heart stops, why me I think as the demon looks at me. I start to panic as my friends keep walking as if I was nothing, but I probably would do the same. The demon then takes me to the centre of the city

“You’ll be the first,” he says to me. My heart is beating so hard I start shaking, but I know that there’s nothing I can do, he puts me in the centre of the sacrifice circle and ties me up in rope. I close my eyes as a gun gets pointed at my head.

“Hold it.” A loud voice says, I open my eyes and see a young man “Why didn’t you invite me to the party,” he continues. He jumps into front of me and attacks the demon with the gun, as the demon get ready to attack him he grabs me and throughs me over his shoulder. Finally someone who can break the demons rules, and win this game.     

Author's Note

terrible grammar, and please tell me want you think. FYI her name is Kiara and the mans name is Hell.

Reviews

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Aaaaaah!! To much greatness!!!! :D
100/100

[Cynthia Man]

Oh my god! I got absorbed now, I just knew I will love your story! I just love the way the world of the story make, gotta be a lot of fun reading it! I actually get nervous when the girl is at the sacrifice circle, but then the man comes out it was fantastic! I got so excitedxd haha.
Very Nice written!

[RachelReaper]

Three cheers for sweet rebellion!!!!!! Heheh, love your mystery rebel.