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A Poem by The Unknown Sith
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There's a coffin here 
as the picture clears 
to see

to her majesty
i stand as mockery
of the wants and needs 
of the demand 
to be free

i am an obstacle
easily removed 
but in the same 
i am a stain 
forever on her name

there is man here 
axe in hand
ready to exit me from this land
the coffin opens more
the crowd adores
the picture clear 
evermore 
as my knees are placed 
to the floor
heaven opens from above 
my head dumped to a stump
stained in old blood
i can't see 
but hear my love 
crying for me

oh I see...
as she raises her voice
my queen
"off with his head"
warmth comes to a bloody red 
the stump is soaked again
the obstacle is removed 
all that remain 
is the pain
for in her heart is a wound 
that she must hide 
deep inside 
for what seem as endless time
that will only be released when she finally dies 
as she lays at nights hoping 
she will find me 
on the other side 

but for now i will wait 
hoping that fate 
will look upon me 
to be able to see her 
see me 
i dream this wish to be fact 
as the picture goes to black.

by the unknown sith

© 2024 The Unknown Sith


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This is a highly disturbing account of a crime committed and brutal justice falling as an axe. Could it be that loving her is his crime? The allusion to the stains on her name seems to suggest a scandal that damage her reputation. Could it be that his escapade with her angered her esteemed family and ultimately resulted in his decapitation? It seems to me so unfair. The mood is dark but it all ends with a hope of reunion someday... on the other side.

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The Unknown Sith

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review.



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History's lips are stained red with lots of blood. Secrets hidden always find the light; and with that light, there are shadows. Those shadows spill from your pen. Well done!

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The Unknown Sith

1 Year Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read it.
This is a highly disturbing account of a crime committed and brutal justice falling as an axe. Could it be that loving her is his crime? The allusion to the stains on her name seems to suggest a scandal that damage her reputation. Could it be that his escapade with her angered her esteemed family and ultimately resulted in his decapitation? It seems to me so unfair. The mood is dark but it all ends with a hope of reunion someday... on the other side.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The Unknown Sith

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review.

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Added on June 29, 2023
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Tags: Love, death, life, feel, real, queen

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The Unknown Sith
The Unknown Sith

Maryville, TN



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I write in a b*****d style. It entertains my brain. My subject are primarily insane. I like to sometime take a story, idea, policy...and write from the opposing side. I find it very original and satis.. more..

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