FATE

"the bloodclot"

Open your soul
your mind to me
all I need you to do
is just worship me
for eternity
then split your soul apart
like the parting seas
as I kill with famine
leprosy
and disease
and all you have to do
is get on your knees
beg for your life
for your soul
for me
and I'll bring you into a kingdom
beyond humanity.
Back to the plot
the dirt
the rot
down in the fires
where the flesh is burning hot
that's where you can find
a piece of me
beside a ripped out spine
is this so-called heart of mine
beating out of the chest
rhythmic
till it controls 

matches every breath
it's a test
I must confess
either your given eternity
or 

agonizing death
this is where you choose your fate
eye twitching back in a seizer state
now your trapped
no time
no escape
now make your choice
before it's too late
is it the hellish fires?
or
the pearly gates? 

confess now

and receive your fate.

by the unknown sith

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

The ruler of Hades...the ruler of hell.
"Come with me, come to me" it's easy," quoth he....

I think many of those looking for instant gratification, having no patience as a virtue...
that is their fate.
there is a fear factor to this poem...almost that idea that no matter how hard we try, we cannot resist.
j.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

kind of dark, i like this, very well written