Outside my window

OUTSIDE MY WINDOW

There's a monster outside my window.

He says he can help me die...if I just let him come inside.

All cause he heard me wish I didn't feel this pain anymore!

He says he can take it all away.

Come inside.

Slipping under my floor,

Creeping under my bed,

Slowly seeping into my sleepy head.

Dream-awake but,

I cant wake up-nightmare.

I can feel him standing beside me.

Then like a Python he constricts every exiting breath like a weight that lifts,

Only to a returning breath with more distress.

He mimics till there's no inconsistencies left.

Synchronized with twisted tongues of lies.

He's inside.

The more I try the more I die, the more he comes alive.

Till I feel no more.

Slowly seeping out of my head.

Slipping under my floor,

Creeping under my bed,

with every word his twisted tongue says.

Dead.

I'm standing outside my window.

Looking at a monster in my bed,

that looks like me...smiling back as it waves; so friendly.

 by  the sith unknown

weeds

Plot: simply put in a plotted prison with brief visitations ...from the sun.

A b*****d! I can't leave this place, for I'm rooted.

Loved by no one for planting these seeds of division amongst a garden with no sign of Eden.

the unknown sith

Reviews

[Michael Stevens]

You set a nightmarish table, US!

[augustus]

I've got a monster in my head! It's called wanting to write I liked your style!

[The Unknown Sith]

"I've got a monster in my head! It's called wanting to write I liked your style!"
Thnx for the read.

[Tinker Pete]

Nice imagery. Everybody has a little monster in them. Nice alliteration in places, like 'slowly seeping into my sleepy head'.
I liked it!

[The Unknown Sith]

Thnx. "Everybody has a little monster in them." So true.

[jorge]

Well written and thoughtful.

[The Unknown Sith]

"Well written and thoughtful." Thnx.