My friend is gone and our friendship is already done.

I have a friend, a very nice friend
I will tell you a story of our friendship and how the story ends.

There was a girl and there was a boy,
They play together and share their toys.

The girl was me and the boy was him.
We both have brown eyes and we both like to swim.

We swim, we eat and we play together.
We promise we’ll be friends forever

When the time we grew up everything change
He looks different, he looks so strange.

He went to a place, a beautiful place
He forgot about me and our old happy days

He made new friends, very nice friends
But how can he forget his one and his only best friend?

The best friend that likes him
The best friend that loves him

Your best friend that will always care about you
Your best friend that will cheer when everyone boos

 
After two years I stopped by to say Hi

I didn’t know it was our goodbye
I confess what I really feel

A very old secret I wanted to reveal
I like you; I love you more than just a friend

And I will always care for you until the very end
You stood there for a moment and finally close the door

My heart was broken and dropped on the floor
How can a friend do that to a friend?

Is this how our friendship going to end?
But I just express myself to you

This is not what I m planning to do
After a long moment you finally open the door

You help me stand up from the floor
You said:

I m sorry but what can I do?
I just froze in front of you when you said I love you.

I do love you but just a friend
I m sorry but I can’t pretend 

I thought to myself my friend is gone
And our friendship is finally gone
 
You’ve been a stupid person to let me go away
But whatever you say, you’ll stay I m my heart and forever you will stay…….

Author's Note

light criticism

Reviews

[Lizanne]

A sad and true poetic writing of what happens sometimes when friendship turns to love for one and the other has "grown" away. A very painful experience. You show lots of talent with this poem. Good rythmn and flows easily. Keep that pen moving and don't let your spirit for writing dry up. It is the ink that flows from your pen and inspires poetry such as this.

[Sicilysclover]

It this is true: he was stupid to let you go! Keep writing!

[linley{luu}]

Very real. I kept thinking of the friend I had like this one. It's very sad, and very honest. I loved reading it.

[Jerry Ables]

A sad but excellent write. Genuinely appreciated. Peace & safety to you & yours!

[The Flawed]

I like it, its from the heart.
in the last line, should it be (stay In my heart)?

[Cassandra D.]

♥ loved the poem!!! :]

[Jemma]

The Good and the Bad.

The Bad: Just that it didn't flow all the way through.

The Good: Its relatable. We lose friends as we grow up. We become diffrent people. It hurts but it happens. I remeber growing up I had all these friends but then one day i woke up and the phone just stoped ringing. Those life long friends just never called anymore. Its horrible how it happens, one day you feel safe surrounded by people whome you thought would always be there for you. And the next day you see them walking down the street with people who you have never seen before. its like everyone else has moved on but you dont want to. You want to hold on to the past and hold onto the people that made up your life but each day it gets harder and they slip further and further away from you.

Nice poem, sad in a way because its pure honesty. Its life. And life can be sad. Its all just apart of growing up. But sometimes, we just dont want to grow up. Because it had always felt so safe, and u were never alone. And to have all that taken away from you leaves u so open and vunrable.

[unspokenguilt]

aww, it's sad...but still very good, Great write!
:) ear

[LeeAnne]

Good poem. The rhyming seems a bit forced in some places. But nice poem. I could really picture it in my mind. Good job.