Liar

Why should I trust you if all you tell me are lies?

You said hello, but you really mean goodbye.

You said you’ll love me forever.

Since when does “forever” means never?

Don’t say you’ll stay

If tomorrow you’ll go away.

Don’t say everything will be alright

If you really want to start a fight.

You said you’ll protect me,

But why did you hurt me?

Don’t promise you’ll do everything

If you can’t do anything.

Can I ask you something?

Of all things you said which one is the truth?

Cause everything I told you, that’s all the truth.

I am not perfect

But I need some respect.

I don’t want your alibi

So please don’t tell a lie.

After all…

Out of all you lies,

“I LOVE YOU” is my favourite.

Author's Note

light criticism

Reviews

[Christopher.Holmberg]

Excellent work , I think you could write a book one day :)
A+

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

wow! that was really great! :D keep up the great work

[Tate Morgan]

wELL iF THAT IS TRUE THEN HE IS NOT A FRIEND AT ALL

[Margie F]

HEYYYYYY! Sounds like you recorded my conversation with someone last week! LOL. This poem would COMPLETELY sum up how I feel. One point to bring to your attention though--the fourth line "means" (subject/verb agreement) should be "mean." It's lightly distracting to the reader, but I was able to get back on track. We all do the typos, so just wanted to let you know for editing. So sorry you had to experience a LIAR, but what great material he/she gave you!

[Phenomena]

haha i love this! < 3 very creative! :D

[Lady Miyako-san of the ..]

I really like this poem!! It is blunt, and the message is beautiful.

[M.S Solis]

very light with a dark message.
i really like this one!

[Drew]

Very nice poem. It sweet and simple, and I like the message behind it! Great job; I truly enjoyed reading this.

[Fanciful Goddess]

GREAT POEM!!! It's cute! kinda funny to.I LIKE IT!!!

[LeeAnne]

This poem is good. It has a great message. It's just you have spelling/grammatical errors and the syllables are way off. But other than that, great poem!