Am i over him?

Did you know how much i loved you?

And now i totally hate you.

I hate your smile.I hate your eyes,

cause i know theyre not for me.

You hurt me and you broke my heart,

you made me weak and Im tearing apart.

I fell but you didn't catch me,

Im in pain but you didn't help me.

I cried but you didn't wipe my tears,

I was drunk but you didn't took my beer.

I died but you didn't grieve.

I left but the only thing you did is sit and watch me leave.

You stood there and watch me bleed,

Youre not the guy i wanted to be with.

I hate you because you let me fall.

You were playing with me like i was a ball.

My heart is not a toy so stop playing with it!

Cause when its broken it will take a long time to fix it.

Trusting you is a mistake.

A mistake i can't retake.

Loving you is the biggest mistake ive ever done,

But when will the right time for me to say that my feelings for you is finally gone.

Reviews

emotions=strong. I feel like I'm with you, watching all of this happen.

[Katrina]

wow. that was crazy good. you really worked the emotions! each line you wrote I could feel the pain. great poem. you got to keep writing.

[Lady Miyako-san of the ..]

I can feel everything you are saying and the emotions are wonderful!

[LeeAnne]

Nice. I could really feel all of the emotions in this poem.

[Fanciful Goddess]

BEAUTIFUL!!!! VERY NICE!!! IMAGINATIVE AND VERY VERY ORIGINAL