Self-Perspective

I feel like the hidden words
Behind a fine line of
Arrogance and Hatred--
Ready to be forgiven and forgotten
For shame

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those hidden words, "peace and love"---

forgiveness is a really good start.

this is quite powerful...your words express much in a short poem...

i like brevity and what it does.

[Drcicarlo]

Sorry for my delayed response! It seems my email didn't notify me of your review. I haven't been on too much, and I have been a subject of the good old "writer's block". Thank you kindly for your supportive words! When I can be relieved of my commitments I will happily read your most recent work. I look forward to it!