[tragedy]

[tragedy]

A Poem by theunionisloud

He led her into the dark.
"Watch out for the lamp," he said.

And she never saw the light again. 

© 2011 theunionisloud


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but, did she see light before being led into the dark?
This is a great conundrum of a piece. Perfectly constructed. I suspect there's a Minotaur in the dark somewhere....
a lamb led, a lamp unused, a vision darkened.....
Good moral in this piece, leave us not forget it.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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She led him out of the garden.
"Watch out for snakes and tax collectors," she said

And he never saw Alice Cooper again.


Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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short and very sweet and clever..

Posted 13 Years Ago


but, did she see light before being led into the dark?
This is a great conundrum of a piece. Perfectly constructed. I suspect there's a Minotaur in the dark somewhere....
a lamb led, a lamp unused, a vision darkened.....
Good moral in this piece, leave us not forget it.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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