Limbs and Core

Of all you here, one must know what

I'm waiting for

What I'm writing about

In the corner of this

endless space

In the corner of this

journal

that will never house all the love

In the corner of

my heart

But I have faith in you.

That your'e waiting

Writing

In the other corner of this

endless space

On a dimension where our eyes 

have locked together

have yet to click

In the same corner

of the same journal

invisible layers 

different colors, same words

That can never house all the 

hidden, expelling 

impossible love

at the intersection of our heart. 

Reviews

[Daniielle7]

i really like this. i like how you described the journal !

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your words are speaking in tongues! languages of god and mysteries..delightful

[SpokenWord]

sounds like a soul mate to me. I only hope you get to read each others journal one day. I like how you played with the words to show the little passion and desire in it. the hopeful and yet faithful heart knowing there is someone out here made for you. Great write.

[Dane Osborne]

I agree, the second stanza is amazing. Passionate and fiery, an impressive work. 100/100

[roarke]

wow. lucky guy. The second stanza is powerful. Such a love affair the heart, eyes and mind can generate. Just watch out for the flames.... is it getting hot in here?