Pressing

Lose me tonight

there

in your mind

you won't find me

there

where you put me 

Love me tonight

here

where I found you. 

Moonlight. 

Breathe through my heart; pull me together

Who was I to you?

Your hands, your hands

around mine

Pulling me together

surround me

Create me. 

Reviews

[vincentbals]

This almost sounds like a song. I really like the emotion in this. Great job.

[OT]

nice!! it has a subtle impact - the moonlight pulling you together - hands entwined - btu then contrasted with the loss - lose me, I'm not there etc - the searching and longing - not lost - just not established perhaps - "create me" - nice!

[roarke]

not over stated yet gives a hint of infinite depth.
The mind, the romance, the creation....

It's a freedom of will, a gift of emotion, for naught but an enlightened recognition....

good balance. deft touch.