To be continued.

O, Sweet crescent moon

side to side you sway

lulling the night sky 

so that her stars may align

Full, Copious Moon,

Sturdy, Anchored Moon

You are beautiful but brute

Your light piercing the sky

Punctuating the day's last thoughts

.

Come back, sweet crescent moon! 

and embellish this sky with

nature's comma,

where the gods rest and sway

and watch over us tomorrow.

Reviews

[Dane Osborne]

impressive and even hypnotic. It had an old style feel but yet it was still very much modern. Well done.

[Samuel Dickens]

Long have our kind marveled at the heaven's most prominent and dynamic feature. Nature's comma--I like that.

[roarke]

Bella, Bella.

artistry.

Isis reincarnate.

[GrandDystopia]

This was beautiful, a found this very peaceful to read.
Nice job and thanks for your review:)

[OT]

very nice!!! such a celestial and supernal piece - the flow so ethereal - almost like someone gazing up one night wondering about the contours of this world/universe! very well written! great language!! nice, nice, nice!!!

[Everett DeValle]

Your mastery of words is boundless...I love the structure...the ebb and flow of your words displayed, just evokes the right emotions, to your audience, in which the reader makes it their own, in what you have shared. Excellent.