Me

It's a repost...I like this because it really is me and the way my mind works.

 

Me?
What do you want to know?
That I'm 5ft2 (which is kinda small)
And to me, everyone’s tall?

Do you want to know that my eyes
change from green to blue?  

That when the sun shines past the cold

My hair turns deep red and gold?

Me?
You want to know the truth?
Past how I look and what I say
Behind this outgoing display?

I have a heart, which beats to life
I have a soul, which is full of desire
I am a person of my own

With gentleness not often shown.

Me?
I'm a girl in a white dress,
Dancing past life's pain and despair

A flower crown in her braided hair

I am a daughter
I am a child
I am free
I am ME!

Reviews

[poetic soul]

:) nice......

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Zachary]

i will always remember this and now i know a little about you.
:D

[Wildecat]

A wonderful poem, glad to see you know who you are so many don't. Nice write.

[John Stussy]

i remember this one. :) describes you very well.

[Loosey]

neato
ME?
pedantic s**t
made from spit
in a world
free from smurfs
come to my house
cause your cute
I promise not
to wear a boot.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wow thats such a wonderful description of yourself

Me?
You want to know the truth?
Past how I look and what I say
Behind this outgoing display?

I have a heart, which beats to life
I have a soul, which is full of desire
I am a person of my own

With gentleness not often shown.

Yes , what is Me? , simple things behind the mask, we all want to have the same small real things :) , to be loved and care, to have our quiet little place. so even if you traveling so much , there is only the small privet place inside you that goes with you anywhere .. Thanks Yos

[ShadowWolf]

This would make most look well beyond the physical and concentrate on the inner person. Very nice!

[Astrid Hamilton]

This poem is very playful, uplifting, an exemplar of being free,
in the wind's own play on a blade of wheatgrass, adorning the sun as it watches such a girl:

smiling.

[Sarah]

This is gorgeous. o= I love how you switch from physical description to emotional description. I especially love the second to last stanza, and how you used physical description to symbolize your inner-self. That's very talented!!! Also, the first stanza is a good time because I can totally relate (I'm 5'1. XD) and, indeed, everyone is quite tall. O_O; Well, great job with this! :)

[Poeticpiers]

TRiumphant celebration of self couched in well written poetic prose I applaud