Hello

 

Hello
Is anyone there?
In this world crowded with people
Within this...place

Hello
Can anyone hear me?
In this world of constant noise
Within this...life

Hello
Can anyone see me?
In this world of a million eyes
Within this...home

Hello
Can anyone feel me?
In this world of touching lips
Within this...love

Hello
Does anyone remember?
That child on the side of the road
Lost in this...hate

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Wonderful, splendid, awesome, beautiful write. You made me speechless this time what to say now or what you write in review. I loved this write, it's so real write you made as usual. Yes, you're right dear 'Lady'. Life's so busy and the world's sooooooo crowed and filled with people and there's no time to hear the voice of your heart or anyone's heart. No one's here to hear, no one is hear to feel, no one's here to remember and no one's here to see... but if there's no one to hear, see, feel or remember then where i'm, where you're and where we are... we're here too just there's only a need to hear the voice of someone's pain, someone's heart, someone's love and of ofcourse of someone's life. We're here to feel the zeal, the pain, the desire of someone's heart, of someone's love. We're here to remember to memorize the moments of life, the min. of life and so on...and of course we're here to see the beauty .. the love .. the nature.. the life of this WORLD... but we don't do that all there where we 're... and then your this write to the tee apply's on it that ...
IS THERE ANYONE TO HEAR ?
IS THERE ANYONE TO SEE ?
IS THERE ANYONE TO REMEMBER ?
OR OS THERE ANYONE ALIVE TO FEEL THE BEAUTY ?

These 4 lines're so touchable and force me thinking about life deeply more. I enjoyed this piece. A wonderful splendid write you made this time and of course you've got me, you've touched my heart and i loved this write as well much from my heart. Keep writing.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this and feel the same way .. as if no hears or sees so many things that are wrong .. people are too busy .. sad..i like this one Lady Tyke!

Chloe
xoxo

[Philip Franklin]

Very moving. I suspect that there is alot of pain behind this.