55 Fiction

A Story by The Tudor Rose

Another assignment for class. Assignment was to create a fictional story using 55 words or less. I used 54...

Nicola awoke to a movement inside of her.The first kick? She looked down at her swollen abdomen and discovered the room was dark. Her breathing quickened and found her mouth was gagged and hands tied behind her. The lights flashed on. Dean was there, scowling. Holding a gun. “Who’s the father, Nicki? ”

© 2009 The Tudor Rose

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Added on July 15, 2009

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The Tudor Rose

Los Angeles, CA

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er um...i like history, like centuries-ago-history (see my name). I started writing seriously in 3rd grade, if you can call Writer's Workshop serious, but I *did* take it more seriously than my classm.. more..

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