Sweet Nothing

My lovely, my baby, do you cry for me,
If you love me, my darling, you’ll let me be,
Arms like wings, we take flight,
If you love me, my darling, you’ll do what’s right.

Letters and roses, and sweet champagne,
if they charge the gates let’s put up a fight,
and if they break us and change us,
let’s end it tonight.

Take my hand and we’ll walk on air,
speed past the cliffs and rain down on the jagged rocks,
They won’t find us,
their game is lost.

You’ve got hands and skin and needs like mine,
You’re dismantled, disgusting and wrong like me,
and yet together our bodies do wonderful things,
merging and twisting, our condemned souls sing.

If you love me, my baby, you’ll take the dive,
If you want me my lovely, you’ll end the lies,
Arms like wings, we take flight,
Break our bones while we smile, we’ll do what’s right.

Author's Note

I'd like to hear some interpretations... :P

Reviews

[Alexander]

Hm. I see this as a sot of summary of relationships, because of all the challenges everyone must face. Sometimes things work out, sometimes they don't, but either way there is suffering along the way. A very nice write. I like all the "dalring"s and "dear"s, and especially the title. At first I thought it would be a cliched love poem, but it seemed much deeper than that, to me.
Z

[just is]

If you love me, my baby, you'll take the dive,
If you want me my lovely, you'll end the lies,
Arms like wings, we take flight,
Break our bones while we smile, we'll do what's right.


Love this it speaks of obstacles that we fave and overcome. We rely on what we can see when we should rely on the things we can't see. Wonderful written write. You do have a wonderful talent I hope to read more of your writes, they are wonderful.

[Lola Nation]

pure sweetness