After Dark

another heart-break poem...

Your eyes, your smile,

a way to win

my heart into

your world of sin

 

Have I not been pretty

Have I not been sweet

Was I not enough

is that why I weep?

 

Tear me assunder,

let me wallow in ruin

sail me into darkness

because it's her you've been missing...

Author's Note

i don't know where this came from, it's been a year or so since i had a relationship fall apart from being cheated on. Maybe some residual feelings of animosity? lol! who knows!

Reviews

[X_Emo_Princess_X]

that was good. heartbreak sucks but sucks even more when you've been cheated on. I just love it. It's really great. The words flow and I can really get into the poem. The words move me so I just want to read it over and over. Great write. Just great.

[Orlando Murcia]

I feel you on the whole cheating thing , it hurts like hell, great poem sweetheart. Orlando Murcia