So He Jumps

Forever wanders the young soul;
Forever searching for the unknown.
Looks down and yearns to know the feeling,
So he jumps.

Reviews

[Alana]

This is powerful. You captured the emotions perfectly, it's precise, and bittersweet. A 'why not?' sort of scenario, with an open ending. I feel as if the jump could signify a few things, and that it could be left to a reader's discretion. This is beautiful, I love it :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

I'll say, nice and to the point