Waiting

 

I have been waiting for u

all the temptations of u

the back and forth anticipation

of u and me to begin

 

waiting for ur touch

aggressively playful

and yet still rough

waiting for that moment

were all of my minds thoughts

and pictures become real

 

waiting, just waiting

waiting for your artistic mind

to paint that picture

on my canvice

waiting

 

waiting to experience new things

waiting for the idea to become real

waiting for u

waiting for that fantasy to become reality

waiting, just waiting

 

creatively waiting

an empty canvice

waiting for an artistic member

to fill this canvice with its promises

an empty canvice waiting for u

 

tossing and tumbling

in ur words I can feel

ur actions

in ur words I can feel

ur touch

so I wait, just wait

hoping to experience ur

artistic member

so vividly told

 

for now I wait

as an empty canvice

waiting for that artistic member

to paint that picture

waiting, just waiting

Reviews

[Tenten]

the time, consant repeptition of that single word makes it seem almost painful, waiting. it hurts. i like the use of artist and canvice though, its what really grab me. a good piece, the longing inside of it hurts though.

[wizthom]

how we do make love to the pen that creates the dreams and fantasies of the imagination.
like heeding the call of the love that says lets get wild,,great write clever to..peace wizthom

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Your poems read like songs, and I love it!

waiting for you, waiting for you, isn't this something us women have experienced all too well. lol. not much more to say, but this is a great poem, and your works are simple yet a treat to savor. thanks.