Writing

For all the readers and for my fellow writers......I figured I'd do something nice.....even if it doesn't make sense...hope u like it

We have seemed to hit an impasse on what is real and what is not real

for the most part I write what is real

my reality

sometimes I mix in a little fantasy

just to make you feel free

free to use your imagination

and say things like f**k and titillation

sometimes you can relate to me

sometimes you cant understand me

but for the most part you can feel me

if you can't understand why I use so much profanity

take a look around are you understanding me

 

 

they asked me once why I speak so quietly

and I told them because I write loudly

so you and the next generations can hear me

and feel me

through stone walls and cemented floors

someone will adore me

I hoped they would get it

I hoped they could understand

With out me

No with out us

Your lives would be so bland

Author's Note

I don't know I felt like writing something about writing and this is what I got.... so I figured I'd share

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This is you!

A testimony and reflection of that individuality within all of us, to write how we feel; warts and all. I'm glad you shared this, because it's also a statement of a writer's freedom to express their persona, through a medium of communication, which encourages creativity and stimulates the minds and souls of others.

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Michael X]

Insightfully written with perspective, accentuated by the intent, and what it means
to be a writer in heart, your words have an underlying encouraging effect.
I enjoyed reading this, very Nice job, Theta

and I love the way you bring the writing full circle with these lines.

they asked me once why I speak so quietly
and I told them because I write loudly
so you and the next generations can hear me
and feel me
through stone walls and cemented floors
someone will adore me
I hoped they would get it
I hoped they could understand
With out me
No with out us
Your lives would be so bland

[BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown]

Ah yes... the beautiful result of babbling on paper! LOL Yeah, this is definitely all you like Phill said. I think I'm going to have to try a few myself just to see if I can get back into the habit. I've been gone too long and I think this piece is bringin me back!

[wizthom]

anger is a writers' worst enemy ,yet it is the force that gives words life ,
a write filled with laughter is only a joy to read.
we as writers walk a thin lin between too much to not enuff to finding just right,
yes i wonder when it's all said and done,do we really give a f**k if we are misunderstood,
peace great write love,,wizthom

[Thanh]

great job, I understand you and your work. you express the feeling of the writer. "they asked me once why I speak so quietly and I told them because I write loudly" that so true.

[Steve Thompson]

Really strong meaning, almost like a statement of why you do what you do. I thought it was interesting write.

[bey]

i loved this:
"they asked me once why I speak so quietly

and I told them because I write loudly"

very powerful and empowering statement. as i kid i wrote because it strenthened me. it was the only time i spoke out loud.

really dig this write. thanks for sharing.

[d]

...they asked me once why I speak so quietly
and I told them because I write loudly...

...make the world hear you sis...writing is definitely the tie that binds US all together.

[H. A. M.]

The first part seems more like a legitamit explanation and the second gets poetic.
Interesting. Like it's defending the first part.
The second could stand alone on it's own with out the first or you could try to write it like the second.
Nice one. Thanks for sharing this!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Nice write. Truthfully spoken from the heart. Thank you for sharing. Debileah