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jus randomly thinking

I am ready

to tear down these wall

lost in confusion

tempted by these demons

sexually driven

by lust

and the willingness to give in

follow the leader

long line of followers

I begin my digression

of lesser

human being

followed by me

crying out

but no one

can hear me

walk to left

but i'm being pulled to the right

not ready for consession

I've been blessed with

thought

a state of mind

and personality

no more

I just breathe

all eyes on me

Reviews

[H. A. M.]

This could have went on some more. I like it because It's raw like uncut diamonds. Being it's random thought you can add and subtract from it now. What ever was on your mind at the time came out but if you wait til later to edit you may forget the inspiration behind this. It's like you can reshape this.
Shake out the loose parts and make it tight.
I like the thinking in this. something you want to say but just can't get it out.
Cool.

[Thug Life]

whoa!!! i love this!!! if u could u should add onto this i think u coulda went on for bout an hour more lol.. aint nuttin else ican really say ur previous reviewer didnt.. uncut diamonds is the perfect analogy.. i love it, its so damn raw!