The Tunnel

This is a little better, in my opinion. Be sure to let me know what you think! :)

Theres a light in the distance

Growing brighter by

the second.

 

It's the end of a tunnel,

Of hate and war that

Overshadows peace.

 

But the brightness is there,

The pinpoint growing

With every step.

 

However, we've got to keep moving

It's our steps that keep our quest

Moving foreward.

 

So, what do you say?  Will you

Join us in our epic journey for

Peace and happiness?

 

It's simple - just try and make

a difference.  A little kindness

Goes a long way.