Burn for Peace

Burn for Peace

A Poem by Yes
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The best thing about this poetry is probably it's title :(

"
Softly shifting clouds weep
Of trying times we could not meet
The challenges of.
 
Sometimes we try
and fail
to succeed. 
 
Sometimes we prevail
only to learn
horrible things.
 
Horrible things that we should
,And could,
Have prevented.
 
Someitmes we need to learn to love agian
Before we can begin
To forgive,
 
Those of us who have damaged
us, hurt us; but we managed
To survive.
 
Survive their threats; their
Torture; our pain where
We wanted to die.
 
We lived, we prevailed - survived,
and hurt.  We burned, we cried
for peace.

© 2009 Yes


Author's Note

Yes
I think it's okay-ish after the first two stanzas. It needs some work, but your comments as of now?

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