Fit to be Peaches & Cream

Fit to be Peaches & Cream

A Poem by Yes
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This was written with the intentions of entering it in a contest. I've really come to like it, and I think it actually has a highly symbolic theme... can you tell what it is? o.o

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And he said to me

Jingle my dear,
And hope to be free!
There's a star in the sky,
With your name on it's tree,
And if it's love that you want,
Don't come looking for me.
It's a big, camouflage world,
With a darkness you see,
That presses itself upon
The wind, sky and sea.
It gushes from the sun,
With a vigor so aptly
Fit to be hidden, cut out,
Scoured from this Earth
Smote from the world
And all that inhabit
This unruly planet.

 

© 2009 Yes


Author's Note

Yes
Odd, isn't it? Now yo tell me what you think the theme might be. ^_^

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Very good! Nonsensical indeed. Thanks for entering it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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