True Love

Ok, it's a short love song I wrote because I was bored and felt like it lol. Please tell me what you think.

True Love

 

 

I woke up this morning, I couldn’t love anymore,

But then I saw a girl,

I’ve once loved before,

I’m falling falling falling,

In love I’m falling,

I’m falling in love, again,

I looked at her eyes, those precious colors,

I gazed at her face, and knew that I loved her,

I’m falling falling falling,

In love I’m falling, I’m falling in love with her, and I know that

I would comfort her, I’d be there every second with her,

And I know, I love her, and no one shall

Change that, oh no one shall do it,

I’ll defend her, I’ll help her,

I’ll care for her, and die for her; oh I’m falling in love,

With this girl and she is you……

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

It was great and capturted true love great!!! Great job!!!

[turtlegirlluver]

I like this, it shows your emotions so well. I can relate to this quite easily. This is so sweet and I love how you show all the extra feelings, of defending and protecting someone, that come with love. Very good!