It's Not Real

"Fake Love"

I'm not a princess.

I should have that this isn't a fairytale.

I'm not the one that's going to get her prince charming to swep her off the ground.

I should have know better to belive you when you said "I Love You".

Now I'm here crying, Trying to forget Cause I honestly belived in you.

I thought we were made for each other..

But i guess what i felt was unreal.

I had so many dreams for the both of us,

Now i can't trust anyone that says "I Love You".

When you said "Were done, I Love HER!",

I bursted into tears right there that moment,

All you did was laugh and say "You actully belived!".

All my friends tried to warn me.

I didn't listen, I got mad and lost almost all of my friendships.

Now i go back to what they all said trying to warn me!

But now here I am crying for a reason I dont know why.

You never loved me why should i be crying for you then?

Your not sorry for what you did!

I'm tired of this!

So what I'm going to do is..

Heal my heart,

Befriend back my friends,

Say Sorry to those i hurt cause of you,

Wipe my tears

and,

FORGET I ever met you!

That will save me from ever getting hurt again...

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SamBug]

This was really good. I liked the internal struggle to get over the guy in this piece and then eventually you came out and said that you were going to wipe him from you thoughts. I love it. It's so strong and powerful and very becoming. You did amazing writing this!!!!

[C.Elle]

It's easy to relate to this poem. It was deep and powerful. I can really hear your loud voice. Nice work!

[*Private Person*]

oh my this is terribly touching and sincere. Powerful write.

[Will Nething]

i liked reading this but was rebuked at the same time because this was probably me when i was young and immature. i have definitely learned my lesson though! thanks :)

[imb126]

diz nt bout u is it????? but i like it

[BOB THE BUILDER YES WE ..]

Duuuuude. This was so sad. WHO'S DA MOTHA F***A THAT DID THIS!!!!! I'MA GET SOME OF MY FRIENDS TA JUMP THAT SONNUVVA BIIIITCH AFTA SKOOL!!! see you tomorrow.
>:[

[KatiePie]

I honestly love this. It will have it's own little place in my heart. The strength it showed was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing this

[Michael X]

the emphasis playing emotions creates a deep sense of loss and suffering,
the reader can't help but feel the words cutting to the core,
the straightforward raw nature of the meaning really bring your words
to life, excellent job, keep it up