fading away

Take away the bad

let the good flow in. 

Dont give in and let the metal slice your precious skin

It wont help in the end

With darkness comes fears and lost hopes

With daylight comes a fake person and fake smiles

hiding your secret from the world

you stay in denial

Memories are flooding back .

Taking away all the good

your life is fading

Live for the good.  

Reviews

[Mars Samuel]

I like the tone, the message, the emotion, and the overall feeling that this meant something to you. That's amazing and I love it. The only thing I would suggest is to change the stanzas, or at least the way they're written. They threw me off a little and made it hard to read with a flow, which took away from the feel (which is fantastic by the way). Can I ask what kind of poem this is, or was it just free verse?
Great job in any case! Please keep it up!

[Alex Crow]

Intersting, Dark but sending the messesge that pain is temparary but death is forever. Great work Keep writing

[Chris]

A lot of edges in this one... multiple directions.