Bubbles

I read a book about suicide and it haunt me at night so i wrote this

Bubbles

Massive or miniscule ones all So fragile and pure.
One gentle touch tears them all apart.
leaves them shattered to pieces
There is no new start.

Full of color just as your glance at the world used to be.
Reflecting your inside these bubbles are anything but bright.
Your last breath wasted for what?
Bubbles that were shatterd to pieces and torn apart
Massive ones and miniscule ones
By one gentle touch
One that became too much.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think ;)

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Since childhood I admire and love bubbles. I liked this poem a lot. I am glad I came across this. :)

[Danny Coykendall]

A very enjoyable read! Well written and deep. Keep the great poems coming!

[SmittyJas]

Tiny Bubbles In the wine makes for a good taste you wait and see.

[AaronFreitas]

I like this one my friend :) It's hard to shake pain and it just eats at us at times. You expressed these thoughts well in this write. Good work :)

[TheMalady]

Oh, great simile! This poem is so deep. It can also be referred to a person with a delicate heart, if not properly taken care of can burst out and might shatter into pieces.

I love the last two lines of each stanza. Great twist. :)

[wordman]

so beautiful,but so fragile! reminds me of ones heart