One way ticket

One way ticket

A Poem by theshygirl
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when the feeling is not mutual..

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One way ticket 
The time passes the seconds tick. 
Running down the stairs. 
As I see you leaving. 
Moving motions as you ride 
I will wait 
For another train because it's a one way ticket anyway.
Once i arrive i can never look back 
You took it Shattered it and i even cut you some slack 
Other trains will come and go your way 
Tease you, make you smile and deliver you sleepless nights everyday.
While i am waiting at the station with my one way ticket.
Waiting for you to take me back 
A one way ticket is all i got 
but all you got me are bits and pieces shattered under your massive wheels.
and now i am balancing on the rocky railroad 
Don't you want me to leave? or do you want me to stay?
I am left with a one way ticket anyway.




© 2016 theshygirl


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theshygirl
please ignore grammar problems and let me what you think !

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One way ticket Please save your love for me I was only going one way to greet you my Friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


How I understand the character in this piece, whose heart is waiting - always waiting although it's hopeless. Also, I really love how you made this piece ambiguous that the readers could interpret it in a lot of ways.

Aside from an unrequited love, this could be a chance or opportunity. Or even friendship that can is still waiting for a chance to mend again. Thanks for sharing this piece! Nicely written! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


theshygirl

8 Years Ago

Thank you so muchh! 💖
TheMalady

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
I get the idea of the one way ticket and I think its a great image you paint of unrequited love or being used.
I couldnt help think of the Beatles song Day Tripper which I think has a similar theme.
A learning experience.
well penned TSG.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on January 10, 2016
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