nobodys home

nobodys home

A Poem by hayley smith

nobodys home

i cant tell you y she was so depereds i couldent help her i just watched her fall .whats wrong  now to many problems.nobodys home .shes been regected all her life she dosn't know where she belongs.its where she lies broken inside .shes losing her mind she cant find where she should' be shes falling from grace shes all over the place.shes lost inside .

© 2009 hayley smith


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Wow, you describe that painful feeling of being numb, lost, yearning for love so viscerally and vividly. I don't like to push about how I understand, but I have been there and it does suck. I am so sorry you feel so much pain. *hugs* Please keep fighting. I know you can make it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it, it makes total sense to me, very well written!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2009
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hayley smith
hayley smith

zanesville, OH



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my mom abandon me .my dad always sleeps and when hes awake all he dose is yell at me for no reson my poems are depressing cause i only write when i'm depressed which is vary often .. more..

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