dad

dads the one

dads the one who trappes me as so

when i want to be free

when i want to go

he stops every indipendins i show

dads the one who wont let me go

Reviews

[Jinx's Heart]

I read your profile and understand to some extent to where you're coming from. My father is abusive too. I am sorry that you are the target of his abusiveness, but please know you will always continue to be innocent and you never deserve it. Hang in there, girl. Once your 18, you can fly from his cage forever.

Excellent poem. :) I'm here if you need someone to talk to.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Ok..I like this I like the new words you use.. that is really cool and brave and rare..I love indepindins..