invisibel girl

I feel like im in a empty world

with nothing but winds

I see people but they don't see me

its like im not there

they don't hear a word i say

am i being ignored mabee forgoten

am i nvisibel

mabee its just a dream

will i wake up

am i dead,

is this even reality?

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Great poem !
Full of emotion .
And to top it off I know exactly how
you feel.
Please read the blog on my page.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Well this is really full of emotion... you have a couple of spelling mistakes but that's ok cause I can look past that.. the emotions you share are ones that many can relate to. With so many busy with everyday life.. changes are here that force people into a mode of me first.. but not on purpose. Times are harder.. alot of people are working two jobs.. lots of families under pressure.. regardless of age.. everybody is feeling this on some level I think. A hobby or in this case writing can really help.. and you scored well..

Your flow, rhythm and rhyme are pretty good here.. I know what it's like to feel invisible.. I have been there.. even in a crowded room and with many friends.. feeling invisible is such a sad feeling. Focusing on school.. making goals and having hobbies I find really help me. Right now I am working on an antique couch for instance and it keeps me busy.. with something I enjoy. I hope if you really feel these emotions.. you find something.. maybe art.. I used to paint alot.. and even today listen to my favorite upbeat music! Thank you for sharing!