End Of A Song

An expanded and edited version of my poetical response, to Momzilla"s poem, " Love's Demise" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MomzillaNC/1412822/

Like two ships
In the night
Never to reach port
At the same time
We parted.

Having drifted away
Over the years
For no one's fault.

Other than
It just happens.

Please forgive me
But I have tried
Everything
To keep you
By my side.

Just wasn't enough
For either
Of us
My love.

Which

Saddens me

To no end,

Please accept 
My fondest apology
As you walk away
Into the night sky.

Hoping

You will cherish

Our special time

Together.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i remember this...the feeling....a long distance relationship....very long distance...here in the states i was, there in Poland she was....distance did us in....not lack of love...just couldn't sustain.

[therisa]

Those type of relationships, are the hardest, Jacob. Those, who are able to succeed, are the very lucky ones.

[ANTO]

This is very special to me - thank you for all - :,)

[therisa]

Your welcome, Anto. Momzilla's poem moved me, in mysterious way.

[Lyn Anderson]

There are some loves who leave us quietly, and not necessarily without pain, but without anger, and they will always remain in our hearts.

[therisa]

I know, KL.

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful. Perhaps your best work.

[therisa]

Thank you, Momzilla. I hope, there is still more room, for me, to grow poetically.

[MomzillaNC]

Naturally. YVW