And The Secret Is ....
A Poem by therisa
Don't understand, how my writing is viewed, as powerful, by other people.
Don't understand Why you say My poetry is Powerful.
As I write it With pen and ink Upon paper.
My frustration mounts Every time Someone tells me This.
Wondering What do you see That I don't?
Please Let it be Not another Cadbury Caramilk Mystery.
For which Only the Devil knows For sure.
© 2014 therisa
Author's Note
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There was, one Cadbury Caramilk commercial, during the 1980s, which featured the Devil, as He ask, what are you willing to give up, to know the Caramilk secret, with the commercial ending, the Devil ask, "Anything?", while laughing.
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Reviews
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Must have been a Canadian commercial, I don"t remember it and my brain stores tons of useless information. But still, your poetry Therisa touches many people in many different ways. This was no exception.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Quite possible, Will, as there are many commercials that air, in the US, only. Guess, it time to cle.. read moreQuite possible, Will, as there are many commercials that air, in the US, only. Guess, it time to clean out the brain of useless trivia. Just not sure, where I should store this, now. Sigh.
But I feel like, I'm the only person, who doesn't get the punch line , on a joke that everyone is laughing at, Will.
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Added on December 9, 2014
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therisaOntario, Canada
About
A pre-op transwoman, writing about my experiences, using free verse. Been told my poems are very emotional and personal, almost like a diary entry in verse.
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