Well you know I had to read this because it had Will in the title. Yes indeed, this is a sad situation and it needs to be dealt with and from what I see, it is. Each day that goes by, because of the internet and spilt second news traveling across the world people are starting to take notice and hopefully this will help. It will unfortunately never end the abuse, because there will always be those who have no disregard for people or the laws, but it could help. Maybe your poem will help as well...I think maybe it already has.
Using "will" in the title was a fluke, Will, as I debate, whether to use; "Murder, In The Second", o.. read moreUsing "will" in the title was a fluke, Will, as I debate, whether to use; "Murder, In The Second", or "Depraved Indifference", as alternatives. Not sure, this poem will make a difference, given the increased reports of violence against women, globally. One can only hope so.
9 Years Ago
I was just joking about Will being in the title. :)
9 Years Ago
I know, but sharing the other possible titles, for this poem, with you.
Too very true. The statistics are appalling. Every single woman, according to those stats, will face some kind of gender-based abuse and/or harrasment.
I read your attachment and it seems that life has little value for some if they can't keep it trapped in a glass jar. It is a terrible tragedy retold again and again around the globe.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Icelandicblue. And there doesn't seem to be, an end, in sight.
Women matter, more than men perhaps, they created us after all. without women people would not be born everyday. It is wrong to mistreat them. They are wonderful people. You have to be really stupid to mistreaat them in anyway!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Steve, for your review. Some people never learn the boundary between disagreeing and outr.. read moreThank you, Steve, for your review. Some people never learn the boundary between disagreeing and outright assault, whether, it's verbal, physical or psychological. I say people, because the abuser can be female.
Wow. Powerful stuff here, and really amazing gut wrenching work. I agree with you on all counts. There still is a huge problem. It is with domestic abuse in general, and sometimes it's the woman who is the abuser, either way, the laws are inadequate and ineffective, and we wait until another tragedy occurs to tsk tsk again. I really thought at points I would end up in the newspaper as the victim. I had the police to my home twice in 10 years, and each time the experience was not one that left me empowered and feeling safe, but more fearful and wary.
Note -- More than half (as opposed to More half)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, KL. When will this violence against women, ever end? Am so frustrated to see another woma.. read moreThank you, KL. When will this violence against women, ever end? Am so frustrated to see another woman, become a victim to this.
A pre-op transwoman, writing about my experiences, using free verse. Been told my poems are very emotional and personal, almost like a diary entry in verse.
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