A Street View

A Street View

A Poem by therisa
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What I saw, walking to my pharmacist.

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Walking down the street
I see
Misters Oak Maple and Beech
Standing forlornly
In their nudity.

While their cousins
Misses Cedar Pine and Spruce
Standing splendidly
In their green coats.

At a local park
City workers have
Draped the trees
With protective bales.

Not sure
Whether
For the kids
Or the trees
Once sledding season starts.

Can feel Jack Frost
As he kisses
Both of my cheeks
With a gentle tingle
To them.

Reminding me
Winter is
Just around the corner.

© 2014 therisa


Author's Note

therisa
Written, November 26, 2014.

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Winter is most definitely coming. I love the descriptions of the trees. You did a fabulous job making the poem jump off the page.

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you, very much, Icelandicblue. Who would have thought, a twenty minute walk could generate a p.. read more
You paint Canadian winter perfectly from the street view.

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

For most parts of Canada, KL. Don't this picture would work for BC's lower mainland.
Beautiful imagery and I like the personification of the trees. Very well done. Liked it. :)

Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Your welcome, Rudi. It feel right, as I walking past them.
Oh, this is a beautiful poem! I love the imagery and atmosphere to this. You are a good poet :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Northern Woman. Still have a lot to learn about poetry, before I can call myself, a good .. read more

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therisa
therisa

Ontario, Canada



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A pre-op transwoman, writing about my experiences, using free verse. Been told my poems are very emotional and personal, almost like a diary entry in verse. If you want to friend me, please review.. more..

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