Pissing Vinegar

A angry rant.

No more

Little Ms Passivity

From me.

 

Maybe

It's the weather

As I'm feeling bitchy

Towards the world

Today.

 

Too often

I have turned

The other cheek

When being harassed

Or insulted.

 

Not wanting

To create a scene

Which I can't win

Only lose.

 

Am so tired

Of people walking over

And disrespecting me

As they do so.

 

Like I don't exist

Or matter to them.

 

Maybe

You should remove

The carrot

Which is stuck up

Your backside

First.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Not bitchy at all. We can only put up with so much before we scoot back from the banquet of BS and say - take this spoon and shove it. Good for you.

[therisa]

Thank you, Tammy. Personally, I would use the fork, as the tine do more damage.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha! So politely bitchy. What a neat write.

[therisa]

Thank you, KL. My parents taught me, if you can't say or write anything nice, than don't. I think, the world was still one super continent, at the time. ;)

[MomzillaNC]

Okay. I can see some the targets of your diatribe are gonna be riled up by your lines. Frankly, you've been kinder than I'd be inclined to pen.

NOTES: The short, broken lines you've set this in give great impact and lend an appropriate terseness to your lines -- well done.

[therisa]

Thank you, Momzilla, your constructive review. Guess, even mad, I'm polite, for the most part, towards others.

[MomzillaNC]

The world has enough caustic, ill-considered voices in the world. More polite attitudes would go far to defuse some of the stress in the society.

[therisa]

Wonder, if this can with a food additive, to create a more humane world.

[MomzillaNC]

No, I don't want anything more shoved into our food. If anything, the crap that's already in food could be part of the problem!

[therisa]

It was just a thought. And yes, more whole foods could be, the solution, to this problem.