F**k
A Poem by therisa
Acrostic
Fundamentally flawed Unable to express myself Clearly Knowing better English.
© 2014 therisa
Author's Note
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Originally written, August 3, 2014.
Normally, I hate to swear, as it shows one's inability to communicate, with their limited grasp of the language, they speaking or writing. People are surprised when I do swear, for it hasn't lost it's shock value, like most rap songs have.
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Reviews
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Well done acrostic.
one minor suggestion, and take it as you wish, because, really, with the subject matter it could go either way, but I would put flawed as opposed to flaw.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, KL, for your review and suggestion.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Travis.
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10 Years Ago
Your welcome...
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Added on October 21, 2014
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therisaOntario, Canada
About
A pre-op transwoman, writing about my experiences, using free verse. Been told my poems are very emotional and personal, almost like a diary entry in verse.
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