F**k

F**k

A Poem by therisa
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Acrostic

"
Fundamentally flawed
Unable to express myself
Clearly
Knowing better English.

© 2014 therisa


Author's Note

therisa
Originally written, August 3, 2014.

Normally, I hate to swear, as it shows one's inability to communicate, with their limited grasp of the language, they speaking or writing. People are surprised when I do swear, for it hasn't lost it's shock value, like most rap songs have.

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Well done acrostic.
one minor suggestion, and take it as you wish, because, really, with the subject matter it could go either way, but I would put flawed as opposed to flaw.

Posted 10 Years Ago


therisa

10 Years Ago

Thank you, KL, for your review and suggestion.
I dont swear much online but it feels good to swear now and then, which is why i swear in real life often lol....Nice poem. I really like it :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


therisa

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Travis.
Travis "Phoenix" Caldwell

10 Years Ago

Your welcome...

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therisa
therisa

Ontario, Canada



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A pre-op transwoman, writing about my experiences, using free verse. Been told my poems are very emotional and personal, almost like a diary entry in verse. If you want to friend me, please review.. more..

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