New Guy

           I like this guy. He seems so sweet.

           There's nothing I don't like about him.

           Can't stop thinking about him.

 

 

 

  Just one thing..... he goes out with my best friend.

Reviews

[RADHICA]

WOW THATZ CRAZYYYY LOL ....I LIK IT!!

[Travis Lawrence]

It's like that song Jessie's Girls. Why is it that people obsess about what they can't have? It's human nature I guess. I like this, the last line adds a vibrating frustration that ripples into the early part when you read it again. It's short, sweet, and relatable, good job!

[Fra/c/ture]

kendra,
i think you should add the last line on to this so its all together. you have a nice hit in the end when you reveal he belongs to someone else already, but i think that should be attached to the rest of the poem.

[justink :):)]

wow just a little amount of words and they are so powerful the way it is worded and how it is put with 3 lines.....................................p.s. loved the way you worded it




justintime

aka justin

[Angel Bird]

Things like that happen ... drat and conflicting situation ... which path to chose? Difficult! ...Very difficult to manage all of those contradicting feelings within ... Yes that's life ... in all its glory!

Only a few words and perhaps it describes the story of a lifetime...
Wonderful work. I'm impressed!