Spelling Game

If an S and I and an O and a U

with an X at the end spell Su (sioux)

Pray what is a speller todo ?

Then if also an S and I and a G

and an H,E,D spell cide (sighed) there  is noting on Earth for a speller to do

but go and spell siouxeyesighed

Reviews

[shandi]

Very cute!

[NCPanthersgurl]

You're right, haha. The english language amuses me so much XD

[Blackbirdsong]

I like the humor in this and you're right, the English language doesn't always make sense and that is something writers and poets have been making fun of and writing about for a long time. This is quite good and it feels like you had some fun writing it too.

[Fra/c/ture]

this is really cool once i realized you were doing "suicide". maybe in the beginning you shouls eliminate some "and" and "an" because it gets choppy. you could just do an S and an I==O==U--X or something like that. also line 5 could be cut in two so it doesnt stick out so far unless you want it like that. the end is the payoff for me because you realize that you've kind of kiddinlgy suggested spelling is a losing battle and maybe yuo should just off yourself. ha! i agree! eye kant speel eethur.

[Edward Clay]

i can't say i fully understand this. but i will comment on the flow structre and rhythm, which i think it prfectly executed. i don't care too much for the use of the brackets, but otherwise, a well flowing piece.