Stone Cold

Stone cold

One should not look at beauty
as a gift,
for it comes with it's own
punishments

Reviews

[Trivn]

I can see several different ways of interpreting this. Is the one being punished the beautiful one, or the one looking?
It could be a statement about how those who are beautiful have things they need to hide, or things they need to put up with because of their beauty, or that those who see it don't realize what they're missing by only seeing the beauty.

[The Realist]

honestly, its all up to the viewer point of view.., but what i visioned whilst inking it out,... was that people are always looking at "beautiful" beings, as them having it all.... but at what price do they pay??. also it goes to the person whose looking at the beautiful people and comparing themselves to them, but what the "looker" doesn't seem to understand is that everyone has something that another seeks or wishes to have in possession.

[DeerInHeadlights]

so much thought in this.. actually reading this made me zone out a bit and think.. thank you for that.. for writing a thought that makes a person dig a little deeper.. good work..

[The Realist]

your very much welcome DeerinHeadlights :) im grateful of your thoughts.

[LapseOfMind]

Hmmmm...truth. Though that truth is universal for al gifts. Nicely done

[The Realist]

thank you Lapseofmind

[Angel of the devil]

powerful. very powerful. i like it

[The Realist]

thank you very much Blood Rose

[Angel of the devil]

your very much welcome realist

[aLittlePain]

Powerful truth. I dig this. R x

[The Realist]

thank you alittle pain much appreciated.

[Devious13]

stone cold truth , its nit always a blessing , some dont see past the obvious but beauty is only skin deep.... love this piece !

[The Realist]

thank you Devious13 :)

[Ted Kniffen]

A very concise poem that says a great deal about many ways 'beauty' is affected. I like it. One thing would be a change from 'shall' to 'should', but that's just an opinion.

[The Realist]

thank you i'm glad you pointed that out to me Ted. much appreciated.

[Mavericks]

Quite Intriguing Piece with deep Connotations! Leave's the Reader in Awe...

[The Realist]

Thank you very much Siddharth Roy:)

[iamshadowine]

lovely piece of writing! deep thoughts! loved it, and totally agree with you

[The Realist]

im glad you do, thank you :)

[Neville]

An intriguing little gem to be sure
She made us think of beauty
But we get punished
To the core
....

[Sunrising]

I agree with you that sometimes beauty is not gift but punishment.... I love it... Nice writing... :-)

[The Realist]

Thank you:)