The Scorned Lovers Rage

The vicious manipulator, the predator divine,
The tempest, the torrent, the animal is thine
The silken words drip from rubied lips,
Your eyes stay trained upon her hips
Her crimson nails trail upon your skin
Coaxing your desire from deep within
Her teeth, they graze your neck so warm
Her fingers tease your shirt, ripped and torn
Her speech snakes through, your vulnerable mind
And soon enough, as you will find
Her lies will hold you, still and content
Her eyes will betray you, with false lament
Her grip will tighten around your soul
Her promises will ease you of the life you stole
Her very presence will invoke your lust
And she will slowly command your love, your trust,
She will then play you, like a pristine violin
Plucking at strings, you've hidden within
Her motives will evade your thought, your grasp
Her intentions hidden behind velvet and clasp
Her gaze will weaken you
Her stare will deny
The plans she has, her revenge, her lie
You've unleashed a monster, of untold wit
A true thing of legend, though you refuse to admit
The woman you captured, she who you deceived from the start
Who you never imagined to be this vengeful and tart
You allowed her then, to believe in your emptiest of speech
Never allowing your loyalty to hover within her reach
And now you must face, the turned Temptress's art
The student turned master, The prisoner holding the key part
The fabled Woman scorned, to strong to fall
She's uncovered your lies, not one but all
So deal with your punishment, as she readies the stage,
For her very final act "The Scorned Lovers Rage"

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

OMG!!! This was amazing. You just kept going and going with what happens in a failed relationship is how it read to me. Just you put words to feelings and purposes for the actions they envoke. WOW!!! Stunner. It read just like it was leading up to a play and took me right there to the stage. WOW!!!

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

The title immediately drew me in. The first line kept me hooked. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

[Shep]

I felt I was in lovers trangle. Man what rush, you really blow mt mind. Another awesome poem.

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WOW, this is so poetic and so well written.
I really loved the emotions through out this.
So nicely written.

[Charile]

Wow. This is amazing, I loved it. Just wow. Amazing job.

This is amazing. You are just beyond the pale. Leaveing me i awe once again. Glad you are not mad at me......I think... Fantastic

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. wow ... this is a rather compelling piece of writing ... excellent flow ... nice title too ... very well justified ...