June 5th, 200

June 5th, 200

A Chapter by Shannon

Kyle and I checked out the attic today. We had to open up the windows to air it out up there, as it smelled something awful. We found a hole in the insulation towards the front right, beneath the lowered section of roofing that covered the living room. To the left of the stairs was another hole, this one straight through both the insulation and the wood beneath it, dropping straight down into the crawlspace beneath the stairs.

I took some pictures to show mom. Guess it is just a mouse problem.


© 2012 Shannon


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Ok sound bites or should I say read bites. Seem strange if left by themselves. What you need to do is put me the reader in the room,pack it with details. Add some dilog .let me hear what's going on in the room. Love the sound bite though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ok good continue. Peeper holes maybe? mouse rat idk.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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