Brainstorming

Brainstorming

A Chapter by Shannon
"

Just random mutterings, ideas, baby plot bunnies, character ideas, and vague outlines.

"
Characters-
Konkadeshin
Konkad- (conk-id) {original name = Joshua}
Male
Brown hair
Blue eyes
Tall
Lean
Hawk

Empya- (Emp-Yuh) {original name= Emilee}
Female
Blonde
Green eyes
Gentle
horse

Basda- (B-ahhs-duh) {original name = ???}
Bakata- (Buh- Kah-Tuh) {original name = ?????}
???
cobra
Handsome
blue eyes
blonde
tall
thin
flexible

Unsin- (uhn [like the french "one"]-sin) {original name = ???}
female
black hair
??? eyes
small
wilder than Empya
panther

"council" type group, sets rules for the unnatural nation (name ideas)
-The Council of Ancients
-The Ancestral Viceroy
-The Holocryptic Council <- my fav

"phenomena" title-
-Natural Contingency
-Arkane contingency
-Eclyptic Contingency
-Contingent Selvalution (sell-vuh-loo-shun)<- my fav


Funky thought-
"Its those people who just have a way with animals, there's something about them, like its in their DNA, like they've rewired themselves that way"


Brief argument with myself- "so who are these council people? names c'mon! Uhmmmm Angeni, she's sweet, her name means "spirit". Why her? well because, she balances the council out, its kind of like she represents mercy, and forgivness. she has pretty hair, white, but not, like its white with every color in the rainbow refelecting off, like a glass prism with light shining through it times 1000. Ok yeah she's on the council who else? Chogan? "black bird" hmmmm, he's mysterious, he sits back on the conversations, speaks seldom and everyone listens when he does. He's handsome, very, jet black shoulderlength wavy hair, but he has scars on his face, like claw marks....ummm think a very handsome, very clean version of serious black. Ok yes hes on. Ummmm, namad and yiska? why did i name them together? are they twins? yes i think so. Tan, namad is a boy, with very bright eyes, his name means "star chaser" but his sister, yiska meaning "the night has passed" she sees so much, she sees the good to come, the silver linings that actually exist, how queer. Yes.their on the council. But who is that woman? the tan, black haired, brown eyed one. She's tall, fit, she looks fast, agile, like a hunter. Like a lioness, sporting the black mane of her forgotten king. Shes in charge, the others listen to her, they react when she moves, and she moves with such grace, like a dancer...yes her name means "star dancer".  nooowwwww why are they all native american names? is there something connecting them to native americans? is that where this DNA comes from? the native Americans? Yes i think so. But its been tempered by other lands. Chogan is pale, of english decent perhaps. Ogin naturally dark, with slight african blood mixed in. Namad and yiska.... are....unknown...i don't know about them... but no one does, they were adopted by Ogin. Angeni.....she's from the north....like a polar bear, polar bears fur is actually clear...is that why her hairs like that? yes shes from alaska, born of inuit and Cherokee blood. Chogan of blackfoot and an unknown english pedigree. Ogin.....ogin is.....also cherokee? why? because she is proud thats why. Namad and yiska, are still unknown, only matching tatoos with cheyenne writing. and that is my Holocryptic Council"



© 2010 Shannon


Author's Note

Shannon
This is just what goes on in my head and my notebook when im getting ready to write.

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I wanna know how a Cherokee got all the way to Alaska :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice very creative :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


The names and descriptions are all good and I know they will grow in detail.
"phenomena" title-
-Natural Contingency
-Arkane contingency
-Eclyptic Contingency
-Contingent Selvalution (sell-vuh-loo-shun)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your plot brainstormings are so much more organized than mine O:
My head hurts XD
I likey the names

Posted 14 Years Ago



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