?

                      Existential
             effect of credentials
       why oh why can't i just be me
  will we ever make it through together
  And will you ever        truly see the pain
   That i feel, how          My emotions reel
   And how my              Heart just longs
                                 Be free, free to
                               chase my every
                              Dream, that
                           seems to be
                          Taunting me
                          Just out of
                          Reach. So
                          now I'm off
                          Into the
                          World to
       
                           Practice
                           What I
                            Preach

                                                               

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

This is great. I did one like a heart, but it doesn't compare to this IMO. The depth of thought, searching for ones self when the self is changing. The butterfly slowly examines her wings before she can think to fly. Then flight becomes second nature.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Another excellent piece. the design is most appropriate to teh subject matter being set forth. A near perfect pairing of visual and written art.

[ICE]

That was really creative, making the words into a question mark. I think that its human to question everything, and want to find out the answers to those questions. Great poem.

[Chirinos20]

A very creative poem. I like how you shaped the words into the question mark. Thanks for sharing.

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Aww I loved this. The formatting was awesome. Very nice, love.

[Michael X]

you have a brilliant thing going here, you should consider the wording
stand-in, the form is way too awsome for the mediocre cliches you are using,
imo what you should do is slowly revise it overtime, focus on words
you never hear, research, look for words that people hardly use,
like you did in the beginning, that was clever. but the rest was bland.
create something original in text, then you can really sweep the reader away
with the amazing form, and surely publish it, i really like it, have fun :)

[seal]

I like the shape. :) Of course, awesome write. Great Job again. :P