drama overdose

drama overdose

A Poem by Shannon

If i asked for a moment
Would you give me an hour?
If i asked for a sprinkle,
Would you give me a shower?
If i asked for a kiss,
Would you give me a few?
If i asked for a miracle,
Would you give me you?

And if i needed your help
Would you know what to do?
If my world had turned gray,
Would you lend me a different hue?
If i needed a smile,
Would you make me one?
If my day turned dark,
Would you bring back the sun?

And if i had lost hope
If i had simply stopped trying
If when you asked if i was ok
I just started lying
Would you call me out?
Would you hold me close?
would you be there to ensure
I wouldn't have a drama overdose?


© 2010 Shannon


Author's Note

Shannon
this one flowed from me really well,

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I really like this one. I felt like this really hits home with how I been feeling these past few days.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this! This is officially my favorite by you! The rhyme is amazing, the flow is perfect, and it's just so pretty. Great job!
~Blessed Be~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hey, great write. You know my answer!

Posted 14 Years Ago


niceness. The first stanza is really, really good! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2010
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