dead blind, and Broken hearted

dead blind, and Broken hearted

A Poem by Shannon

That Love song
Will never be about us
That broken hearted fool
Who thought he could trust
But then he turned his back
she let hims he how much she "Cared"
The Knife sticking out
and a cold chuckle from her throat
Shows how much love she could devout
A broken hearted fool
With not a penny to his name
It seems shes won
and gone on to play another game
Wahat a stupid little b***h to let him go
Waht a broken hearted fool
For not telling her no
For not seeing the danger
of a woman harboring greed
A dead blind broken hearted fool
Who could never really see.

© 2010 Shannon


Author's Note

Shannon
i wrote this while following the rule that inspiration is indeed an excuse to stay up until 4 in the morning no matter the outcome. So enjoy the 4 in the morning crappiness ;) lol

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okay you two seriously, it isn't about anyone in particular.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nah i think i know who its too..... did they break up yet?

Posted 14 Years Ago


If this is what i think it's about, then there is much you don't know. I didn't let him go, and he never let me go. We're still together, still holding strong.
And it's not crappy, it's actually pretty good. Very powerful. Very emotional. Good job.
~Blessed Be~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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